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Post by shekdown[TOZ] on Nov 7, 2005 3:48:19 GMT
Seeing There were none on the archive i decided to make one I will post formula depending on ratings and suggestions please feel free to suggest your views on how to improve it
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Post by ecwrulz619 on Nov 7, 2005 3:52:05 GMT
its ok i dont like face gj on shirt tho 7.3/10
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Post by shekdown[TOZ] on Nov 7, 2005 4:21:22 GMT
^^ thank you i suppose gj means good job.....
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Post by Jacknife on Nov 7, 2005 4:26:53 GMT
It's pretty good,not to shoot on anyone,but don't be suprised if a certain someone goes nuts on it,I say 7/10 aswell.The body seems very acurrate to me,the face just okay,but okay isn't bad.
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Post by shekdown[TOZ] on Nov 7, 2005 4:29:28 GMT
^^ thanks for the rates but i really do need details on how to improve the face ill do tht and update it
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Post by Jacknife on Nov 7, 2005 4:32:16 GMT
Well,the jaw is a good place to start,he has a very wide jaw,the eyes also,his eyes have alwaysw been pretty level,and yours has that asian twang to it.I just know i'm gonna get balsted for my prevous post,lol
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Post by shekdown[TOZ] on Nov 7, 2005 4:34:27 GMT
thankx for details ill make the update today
mor rates please
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Post by Barinthus on Nov 7, 2005 6:02:24 GMT
Change his underwear to erm... I think either number 4 or 5? Give him different knee pads (smaller, non detailed ones). HIs jaw is wider than youve made it and the face needs some more age to it. Other than that, it is quite good. 7/10, keep working on it
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Post by shekdown[TOZ] on Nov 7, 2005 6:35:50 GMT
Ok... ill make the changes but his age - he is supposed to be young coz he's 80s hogan
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Post by EdgecatedLuke on Nov 7, 2005 6:41:43 GMT
Well, the attire is good. The face is really bad. Eyes need to be bigger in height, eyebrow angle needs to be lowered to about -12. His muscles are over-done, and the Y should be closer to 50 than what it looks like you've done. His abs need to be wider and taller also.
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Post by rhino1 on Nov 7, 2005 7:00:16 GMT
the face is off but i like the attire keep working on it and you will get it right.
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phenom
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Post by phenom on Nov 7, 2005 7:02:55 GMT
face needs work, skin should be darker, but 7/10
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Post by shekdown[TOZ] on Nov 7, 2005 7:08:40 GMT
Im working on the face but i think the abs are ok.....but im making it taller....its width is right coz thats how he was in the 1980s
as for the muscles...he was pretty buff back then
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Post by shekdown[TOZ] on Nov 7, 2005 12:25:34 GMT
Here is the updated CAW Credit to Bhangraman for the Jaw please rate...
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Post by Swantonbomb89 on Nov 7, 2005 12:48:16 GMT
attire is pretty good face can use more work 7/10
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Post by shekdown[TOZ] on Nov 7, 2005 12:50:57 GMT
swanton....did u check the updated post........just above your post
do u still think the face needs improvement?
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Post by stcrea80 on Nov 7, 2005 13:06:15 GMT
hey shekdown, caw is not bad. Bodyform is good but you need to work on his face. Change the Face Skin give him some dimples if that is the right english word :-) and do something with his eyes. I think his eyes donĀ“t drop that much just his eyebrown does. Give him short sideburns, same colour as the Hair colour. And make his Jaw a bit heftier i would say. And then you will have a good Hogan all in all i give you a 7/10 good job.
oh yes and do change the size of his mouth make it a bit smaller it does look to big on his face IMO.
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Post by shekdown[TOZ] on Nov 7, 2005 13:09:36 GMT
ok.... thankx for the ratings dude
more ratings please
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Post by Jacknife on Nov 7, 2005 13:13:27 GMT
Man,your all over the place shekdown(he'll get it) major improvment to your first version,i like it alot better
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Post by WolfgangJT on Nov 7, 2005 14:00:53 GMT
That's actually not too bad (the update)....work on the cheeks a bit more...they look too puffy looking...and make the mouth/lips less thick looking...Hogan's lips are supposed to be hardly noticeable. Also, add eyebags under the eyes and level his eyebrows off more (bring eyebrow angle 1 up). If you end up having any other extra layers, use a design to put a dimple on his chin. And I would widen the abs.
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