Hurricane CAW by TomRice - Formula on Page 2

[Tom Rice]

Yes I know there are way too many Hurricanes lol, but for some reason I just felt like giving it a shot myself anyway.

Personally, I think the shape & size of the mask is pretty good, although I couldn't get the white/green lines around the edges of it very well. I did get a green outline on the side of the mask though. I like the hair, the face is OK but could definitely be improved, and the attire is reasonable given the amount of layers I had left. I think that's the best attire I could come up with after making the mask. I know I missed his tattoo, I could add that too but I'd have to use a layer hack. If I decide to release the CAW I might release tattoos with it as an optional layer hack, but I might not even release it anyway unless it's popular, I only really made it for fun. Anyway see what you think! Feedback please:

Pics:


Reference:
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[cenacantwrestle]

looks ok,if you overwork it might be real good.
For Face:I prefer one from the archive,but yours is ok as well.Make the eyes look more angry and change hair colour a bit.
Attire: Change Coulor of thights,add knee pads(will look much better with them)and overwork Hurricane logo(I know thats very hard cause you wont have many layer left,but try something different).
...7/10

[Tom Rice]

Thanks for the ideas. I'll make the hair slightly greener, and I have hacked 2 facial hair layers since I posted those pics. I could reduce that to one layer of facial hair, and add something else, but I can't add kneepads as a hacked layer because they need to go over the tights. I could hack the tights layer I guess, and then kneepads would be an optional extra for those with hack devices. I'm trying to improve the face too, and did my best to make the eyes smaller, but they are the smallest they could go now. Reworking the logo isn't possible because after improving everything else there just simply is 0 layers left I've used up everything I possibly can.

So do you think I should have tights as a hacked layer, and then kneepads as a normal layer, and then those who havn't got hack devices they can just use tights without kneepads?
Who's Hurricane face did you like better btw?

[wtferrell]

The only thing I see that I don't like is the lip color. Other than that, I think it is awesome Tom. Your face is almost dead on... Looking good. 9/10

[Tom Rice]

Thanks . All I've got from gamefaqs all day is "Erm.. very basic", wonder why so contrasting opinions. I'll make those improvements tf2 suggested anyway and then get some better pics up

[EdgeHeaD]

good but not the best but good nontheless 8/10

[Swantonbomb89]

Not bad Tom I think you should add some knee pads and add alittle facial hair under his mouth and fix the logo So far i will give it a 7/10

[Tom Rice]

I've made various improvements, added a tattoo (it's not particularly accurate but it's best I could get with the layers available), I've changed the hair colour slightly, made facial tweaks, made the eyes smaller and darker, added kneepads and made slight adjustments to the tights design, though with the number of layers used I couldn't do a great deal there. Here's the updated pics:



(The bottom-middle pic is the tattoo on his right arm)

[Kane]

i like it apart from the shoes.9/10

[Tom Rice]

Ok here is what I think is probably the final version of this CAW, if people want it the formula should be coming soon:



Feedback still welcome

[Sparx™]

its v.good man!

[bloodstrife]

ermm, Good work I wud use but that takes time and effort and that is something i dont have nor want to use

[Tom Rice]

That's fine, thanks for the feedback anyway, same to everyone else

[KOTW]

Mehhh...Im not crazy about the attire or body morphing.

I do think the mask is great, and the face morphing is pretty good.
7.3/10

[Barinthus]

hey Tom, it needs different kneepads, the ones he has right now are too reflective, what is up with the brown in the middle of the "Hurricane logo" on the pants? I like most of the rest of the thing, if you want a better tat, just use an "o" design, the thing only looks like an o with 2 lines on the top and bottom anyway, simple to make in the game, just 3 layers. 7/10

[Tom Rice]

I'll see what I can do about the kneepads, a few people said that. I did think about using the O and two lines, but I have no layers! I certainly can't use 3 on his tattoo, maybe I'll just use some sort of O-like symbol and leave it as one layer, using something like that might look better. The hurricane logo looks kinda brown because it looked too plain when I left it all white, maybe I can edit that into a greeny colour which would look better. Thanks for feedback

[Tom Rice]

Here's the latest pics:



What do you think now?

[Tom Rice]

I've just changed the mask, but not saved it yet, can I please have some opinions on which mask is better? Should I continue with the changes or go back to how it was?

[Tom Rice]

Nm you wern't quick enough, I decided that the newer mask is miles better, and I even freed up a layer to make an almost perfect tattoo. I think I'm at/ or almost at the final version now, how's this:

[Bactine]

Pretty damn good 8.5/10. There's something about the facial hair that I don't like. I just can't put my finger on it.