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Post by EdgecatedLuke on Feb 9, 2006 20:02:22 GMT
VERY Early Preview of Steve Blackman. I am completely dis-satisfied with the face - the eyebrows, eyes and beard are definately going to be changed. The morphing and attire I am satisfied with.  References: img259.imageshack.us/img259/3880/lowqualityblackmanrefs4wf.jpgI REALLY need help with the face, so CONSTRUCTIVE criticism is accepted. I do not want rates, I just want feedback on what looks wrong. V2 Blackman: Lots reworked here, you should all see the difference.  |
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Post by KnifeEdge™ on Feb 9, 2006 20:03:35 GMT
face needs work a bit, overall it does look good 7.5/10  |
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Post by EdgecatedLuke on Feb 9, 2006 20:04:07 GMT
DAMMIT I just said the face needs work, but WHAT?  |
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Post by chickothrottle on Feb 9, 2006 20:06:31 GMT
liten up the eyebrows, over all not bad.
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Post by JC "El Cangry" on Feb 9, 2006 20:11:00 GMT
Maybe make him younger and lower the transparecy of the beard a bit. 7/10 so far.
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Post by KnifeEdge™ on Feb 9, 2006 20:12:34 GMT
yup make him younger and adjust the eyes a bit, and the eyebrows
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Post by EdgecatedLuke on Feb 9, 2006 20:13:14 GMT
The eyes really bug me. I'm trying to make them look like Steve's surprised yet menacing look.. not working. |
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Post by keibo on Feb 9, 2006 20:49:08 GMT
make eyes little bigger (with height not size) and less width, an angle like 20, for the eyebrows I think u need to adjust transparency to make it more realistic and maybe make a little more space between the eyes. maybe cheek more thin also
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Post by terror on Feb 9, 2006 23:12:23 GMT
I think the beard, eyes and head shape need the most work. Take my Steve Blackman CAW for example:  I managed to pull off a decent beard, although it took up a few layers, it was deffinately worth it. Blackman also has more of a square head than you've done. I know mine isn't all that great, but if it gives you any help then that's cool. I'm not trying to hi-jack your topic, as I posted mine ages ago. I just wanted to try to help and give some pointers.[/color] |
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Post by infamous on Feb 9, 2006 23:14:22 GMT
terror give the formula to that steve blackman caw beats this one  |
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Post by terror on Feb 9, 2006 23:15:36 GMT
terror give the formula to that steve blackman caw beats this one Like I said, I posted mine a while ago. This is a topic on EL's Blackman. If you want mine, you can go back and find the formula or PM me. Don't talk about it in there though. |
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Post by infamous on Feb 9, 2006 23:21:50 GMT
man... who cares if u steal this topic i aint goin back to about 53 pages...
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Post by Dookie_Twinkle on Feb 9, 2006 23:23:06 GMT
Don't steal his Thread.  This is about Edge's Blackman. |
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Post by infamous on Feb 9, 2006 23:27:25 GMT
... welll if he wasn't satisfied with it then he should of never posted this trash anyway 4/10
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Post by thehandyman on Feb 10, 2006 1:52:14 GMT
... welll if he wasn't satisfied with it then he should of never posted this trash anyway 4/10 Please do not post here anymore. |
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Post by infamous on Feb 10, 2006 1:54:46 GMT
please shut up
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Post by EdgecatedLuke on Feb 10, 2006 6:26:44 GMT
Dude shut the fuck up.
I ask for constructiveness, not for jackasses like you to come in and trashing my topic.
And terrror, thanks for the tips too
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Post by Dick_Dan on Feb 10, 2006 11:29:27 GMT
damn u just reminded me how much i h8'ed blackman, lol errr... anyway looks good so for, keep working on it 7/10  |
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Post by •KBC• aka LitaFan on Feb 10, 2006 12:33:34 GMT
the eye make-up is really freking me out, i would take that off and make the eyes a little bigger, other than that it's good so far 7/10
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Post by terror on Feb 10, 2006 15:05:31 GMT
And terrror, thanks for the tips too No problem. V2 is looking a lot better already |
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