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Post by johnd on Feb 12, 2006 23:03:16 GMT
Ok first things first, this is my first attempt at a caw, i know it's crap, you know it's crap, but humour me none the less.  What I would like is constructive criticism, so that means no "Hey that's great!" or "Hahaha that's crap" because that won't help me at all. "It's ok but the eyes look too wide and the lips look too thin" or something like that is what I'm after, if you help me, then I'll share some more of my creations.  Ooh what I would like is some help getting the design on the side of the tights, I did try torso, but the design was too high and i tried the legs but the design was too low!  Anyway, enough of the lecture! I give you my first ever CAW, just a photo atm, I might post the formula when I'm at least 95% happy with it.  |
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Post by phantasm on Feb 12, 2006 23:23:12 GMT
its cominig along nicley the pics arn"t the clearest though so its a little hard to tell with somethings, does he have stubble? maybe darken the skin just little and liten of the colouring on the hair and eyebrows as that yellow os far too bright. i cant really see to much wrong at all with the face morphing but maybe a change in face skin and a few make ups arond the eyes and cheeks will help it along.
lol for the design on the pants im not sure but i think if you go into leg paints an search through there you'll find one that looks similar to the holly curve though dont know how your going to get writing in it without hacks.
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Post by hbkandhartscrewed on Feb 12, 2006 23:24:48 GMT
it's not really that bad imean great attire but i think he looks too old and theres something about the hair it's too bright
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Post by johnd on Feb 12, 2006 23:25:08 GMT
oh i knew i forgot something! >_<
I forgot the facial hair! thanks for that. I'll add some stubble and post an updated pic later.
Thanks for the tips phantasm!
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Post by ericmelo on Feb 12, 2006 23:31:01 GMT
for a first caw it looks nice
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Post by captainrandom77 on Feb 12, 2006 23:50:31 GMT
Change hair, tights are too long, work on the figures too, and the face could use quite a bit of work, Crashs face is kind of hard, I havent seen one that was great at all.
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Post by johnd on Feb 13, 2006 0:04:06 GMT
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Post by tezrez on Feb 13, 2006 2:22:31 GMT
getting better but looks like top of the head needds to be wider 7/10
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Post by crinkham on Feb 13, 2006 2:51:08 GMT
his hair is to yellow, make it more blonde-ish. but pretty good other wise 6.5\10
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Post by Deadmanne on Feb 13, 2006 11:20:52 GMT
7/10
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Post by cawstrio on Feb 13, 2006 11:29:50 GMT
it is`nt good but not crap
change the hair
and make it more blonde not yellow
6.5/10
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Post by KnifeEdge™ on Feb 13, 2006 11:49:39 GMT
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Post by Darth_Kennedy on Feb 13, 2006 11:53:10 GMT
quite good shorten the tights bit and make the hair more blonde. This could turn out very good.
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Post by EdgecatedLuke on Feb 13, 2006 11:55:37 GMT
I'd use a shaved head, but the morphing its self looks nice.
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Post by dx466 on Feb 13, 2006 12:37:09 GMT
Nice, 7.5-8/10 I dont like the hair choice,and get rid of the mustache(IMO)
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Post by johnd on Feb 13, 2006 19:32:43 GMT
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Post by cawstrio on Feb 13, 2006 20:07:23 GMT
still needs some work
is his wwe or tna
7/10
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Post by RKOrton on Feb 13, 2006 20:10:11 GMT
Hairs a bit too yellow  But its a pretty good caw, best crash yet 9/10 |
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Post by johnd on Feb 13, 2006 23:10:54 GMT
Thanks for all the kind comments.
Has anyone got any comments about the body as I didn't really change much on that.
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