MSI
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Post by MSI on Dec 22, 2005 1:40:44 GMT
here it is, any suggestions?  |
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Post by LyPhe2k on Dec 22, 2005 1:48:49 GMT
At leasy try to match something, anything.
Boreder is too thick and I dont like the thick stroke.
Stroke around the main HIM text is too thick as well.
Use a different color, purple looks horrible on this, at least this shade.
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Post by I Got Banned! on Dec 22, 2005 2:16:27 GMT
^Everythin y2k said, theres one more thing that bothers me, the placement of pixel text "VILLE VALO" and "FDF"
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MSI
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Post by MSI on Dec 22, 2005 2:30:42 GMT
ok i fixed it up a bit, any better?  |
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Post by I Got Banned! on Dec 22, 2005 2:39:15 GMT
what i meant by "FDF' placement, is like to put it int the corner
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Post by Motivation/PlattGrappler on Dec 22, 2005 2:45:52 GMT
on the updated version
- the bg is alot better and looks nice with the stock
- make the text all white so it stands out more
- dont blend the border, it doesnt look good
- get rid of the pixel text over "HIM" and move your name text right into the corner
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Post by MSI on Dec 22, 2005 3:03:12 GMT
ok i fixed the things you wanted, and i added a red bar over the main text to make it stand out more, i thought that made it look a lot better  |
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Post by I Got Banned! on Dec 22, 2005 3:06:55 GMT
good improvement from first, but somethings look quite choppy
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MSI
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Post by MSI on Dec 22, 2005 3:08:05 GMT
yea, theres nothing i can do about the text, so ill just leave that alone haha
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Post by I Got Banned! on Dec 22, 2005 3:11:58 GMT
^Maybe the text would look better w/out stroke on it
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Post by Jareth Raine on Dec 22, 2005 3:23:13 GMT
Hook me up with one
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MSI
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Post by MSI on Dec 22, 2005 3:31:20 GMT
what?
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MSI
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Post by MSI on Dec 22, 2005 3:34:38 GMT
ok i fixed the text (thankfully) haha  |
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Post by Jareth Raine on Dec 22, 2005 3:36:13 GMT
I like H.I.M I have a bunch of heartagrams some where and i like Ville Valo.
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MSI
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Post by MSI on Dec 22, 2005 3:37:48 GMT
oh, kool
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Post by annus on Dec 22, 2005 7:04:47 GMT
u should move the heartagram over so HIM is in the middle of it not off to the side and change the bg and the colours dont match it hsouldnt have white in it it should be darker
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Post by MSI on Dec 22, 2005 22:33:15 GMT
ok i moved the heartagram over, i kept the bg, i didnt like how it turned out when i change it  |
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Post by Bactine on Dec 22, 2005 22:56:58 GMT
Pretty damn good.
There's something about the boarder that's eatin me but I can't put my finger on it.
I like the bg though.
It looks kinda.......long though, Idk It just feels too long for my tastes.
You're definately improving
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Post by annus on Dec 22, 2005 23:40:20 GMT
well uve improved it alot and the boarder seems to have a 2px black line in the inside of the boarder and u should try changeing the boarder's layer blending to overlay or something
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Post by Sparx™ on Dec 22, 2005 23:44:52 GMT
the updated version looks much better...
I still agree about the border issue...it doesnt look right,.
main pic is good
background doesnt do it for me, but I dont know much about HIM so im not sure if hats they're type..
7/10 (if u were looking for a rating)
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